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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest 
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Rachel at dusk dancing in the grass spinning the earth four year old fingers reaching |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
A four year old spinning in dance is always delightful. I can picture her. martyjo |
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RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk |
Many ways we can picture this happening in our minds |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Thank you for your replies martyjo and RedStoneEB. |
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troubadour Junior Member
since 2006-02-09
Posts 43in the land of yore |
This vision is clear in my mind. t |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Thank you troubadour. |
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Dominique-Simone Senior Member
since 2005-11-12
Posts 643 |
Wow, again you make me sit in awe! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Thank you Dominique! Do not sit.... get up and dance!!! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Wonderful scene! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Thank you Martie. |
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poettothecars Senior Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 1093New Zealand |
an interesting title to your poem - given I have composed what I refer to as 'Rachel Psalms' - Some are in metaphor and others relate to the Rachel Bible stories and a girl named Rachel. While I cannot find myself to comment on your above contribution - my Rachel material numbers in the area of 200 or more poems Therefore I could not resist the temptation to drop in and have a read. a poet who cares |
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om Junior Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 31ontario/canada |
cute! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Thanks for the read poettothecars. I have no idea why I picked the name Rachel... except I love it. It could have been me... I remember feeling I was spinning the earth when I was small and the center of the universe. I think perhaps our foremother Rachel, from the Bible felt the same when she was but 4. Thank you so much om. |
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