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poetry_queen
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since 2006-02-02
Posts 94
england,

0 posted 2006-02-08 04:44 PM



i look you in the eyes,
and i can feel your heart.
i look and feel your soul,
and i know we'll never part.
when yu say you love me,
i feel it deep inside.
and when you hold me closer,
i know you didn't lie.
you're such a special person,
whom i'm never going to leave,
and i'd hate it if i hurt you
as that would be to decieve.
everytime i touch you,
i feel your warm embrace.
and everytime you touch me,
my heart begins to race.
it's written in the stars ;
you and i were meant to be.
and as we hold each other closer
it's true ;
i love you and you love me .

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JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
1 posted 2006-02-08 05:45 PM


"i look you in the eyes,
and i can feel your heart.
i look and feel your soul,
and i know we'll never part.
when yu say you love me,
i feel it deep inside."


Nice!
Beautiful song.

JL


JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2006-02-08 11:12 PM


Very nice....James
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