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I thought it strange...
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I thought it strange... |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
I walked along a bubbling stream and I heard your laughter - and I thought it strange... a light breeze swayed the tree tops and the gentle rush made me think of your soft whispers - that was a bit strange... then I happened upon two crystal pools and I saw you looking back at me - and I thought it somewhat strange... I strolled along a beach and the waves reached out to me and I thought of your kisses - that did not seem so strange... and I walked on and came to a desert and it made me think of the time without you; but then the gently sculpted, soft dunes reminded me of something else about you — and that was quite familiar; at last I came to deep, vast woods, mysterious, veiled in a mist of mystique... and I knew you are my Earth and that is not strange at all... CG |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
marvelous...simply stunning write, very much enjoyed |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
Thank you, LeeJ, appreciate the comment. CG |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Stunning...just absolutely stunning...wow! your words are like fine jewels, draped around my neck~ ~ARH  |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Good one!! JL  |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Ahhhh... lovely CastleGuard. |
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helenadepp Member
since 2006-01-16
Posts 59durham, england |
loved it! |
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