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howardtsu
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since 2006-01-29
Posts 678


0 posted 2006-02-08 10:30 AM




you're the rest of me that's not on the journal

every nite before i go nocturnal

i pray to God that you'll be my eternal

soulmate

but it's such a slow wait

living for your love

like Noah i'm sending out a dove

in search of your land

please give me your hand

so i can stand up again

and be your friend

this time



love,

howard



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Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
1 posted 2006-02-08 10:34 AM


Howard, this was such a sweet and tender write. I really enjoyed it. In fact, I was smiling all the while!


Linda

poetry_queen
Member
since 2006-02-02
Posts 94
england,
2 posted 2006-02-08 04:49 PM


really enjoyed this, i had a grin like a cheshire cat after i had finsihed reading!
such a fantastic write. keep up the good work
leanne x

JL
Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
3 posted 2006-02-08 10:23 PM


Good one Howard.

JL


1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace
4 posted 2006-02-08 10:52 PM


"please give me your hand

so i can stand up again

and be your friend

this time"

powerful words


[This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (02-08-2006 11:34 PM).]

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