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sim0riah
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since 2004-09-07

Posts 253
Wyoming USA

0 posted 2006-02-08 09:36 AM

One warm summer night, I walked through the street
A tired old man, I happened to meet
Brittle he was, Now moving a little slow
Still sharp as tack, and asked "Do you know"

My attention was drawn and I sat on the curb
I listened intently as he slurred every verb.
Discussing his memories and trials in his life
And how he held up his sweet loving wife

The story began with a pull at my heart
As he spoke of their life, they were never apart
As I continued to listen, to every word he had said
I could feel every thought, envisioned in my head

He said "my beautiful angel, we met on the walk,
She bumped into me and we started to talk
She was captivating, Enchanting and I knew right then
My heart was on fire, As my mind began to spin

The next thing I knew, we were deeply in love,
Walked down the aisle, God witnessed above.
From that day forward, my life was true bliss
Lived each day for each other, And sealed it with a kiss

Then one day a sickness took us by surprise
I held on so tight, but her spirit did rise
I know now as I did in the past
Our love has endured, And the memories last"

As he finished the words, he fell off to sleep
His frail, lifeless body fell into the deep
I'll never forget his words to inspire
Love is a gift, With a never ending Fire

Only at night you can see the depth of the sun

Sim0riah

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2006-02-08 11:14 AM

Richard~
You wove a beautiful story with a heart-catching ending~

'Love is a gift, With a never ending Fire'

Yes ... indeed it is exactly that~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

poetry_queen
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since 2006-02-02

Posts 94
england,

2 posted 2006-02-08 04:47 PM

really enjoyed this

Bagger Vance
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since 2006-02-01

Posts 108
Aotearoa

3 posted 2006-02-09 02:58 PM

aye poet
drew him in you did

White Gold Wielder

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

4 posted 2006-02-09 03:53 PM

What a beautiful story. I enjoyed it very much.

DennisTheMenace
Member

since 2005-09-04

Posts 240

5 posted 2006-02-09 03:59 PM

good poem, good story

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