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IntoTheRain
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since 2006-01-29
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0 posted 2006-02-08 09:34 AM


the leaves turn black when they have learned to fly
so does the day
but in the wind of the first hours of darkness
sudden joy sent
from an unknown tree
i have not deserved you



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JL
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1 posted 2006-02-08 05:58 PM


Nice one intoTheRain.
Enjoyed.

JL


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Lurking
2 posted 2006-02-08 06:01 PM


Umm... wow. Excellent stuff, I look forward to reading more of your writing.

Andrew

The Lady
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3 posted 2006-02-09 11:10 PM




"the leaves turn black when they have learned to fly"

Nice job Rain.



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