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MERCURY
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since 2003-04-16
Posts 190
Ireland

0 posted 2006-02-08 08:24 AM


Oh how I far I have fallen from the tree
I am unrecognisable even to thee
My thoughts are paved in darkness
Pain reverberates throughout my fragile body
Looking at my hands
I feel a sense of shame
For they have never set about achieving my dreams
My dreams have now become nightmares that are lost at sea
Its seems that peace has eluded me


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JL
Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
1 posted 2006-02-08 06:17 PM


I like this, but it makes me want to preach.
Allow the Peace to enter, it’s free.


JL


RedStoneEB
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since 2003-06-08
Posts 772
uk
2 posted 2006-02-08 06:20 PM


Sometimes peace is hard to come by and sometimes we never really know the difference
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