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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2006-02-08 07:32 AM



Come upon
In the laundry room

Un-strapped un-maid
So ready for blood

Gods help him
Who finds the paragon
As yet undone

One can feel her anger
Through the back of his head



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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2006-02-08 09:18 AM


if one feels my anger, perhaps one might feel my pain, embarrasement, shame, and violation, as well...look deeper into anger and ask yourself why someone becomes angry, because they were hurt, violated, lied to, or abused.  

Good thoughts John...opens another forum up perhaps.

Thank you for sharing.


The Lady
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2 posted 2006-02-09 10:58 PM





                      

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3 posted 2006-02-09 11:34 PM


THIS works at every level....makes me think that perhaps one should have eyes back there, to see it coming.....

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Drauntz
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4 posted 2007-04-23 02:28 PM


must be is heel.
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