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A Navy Seal
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A Navy Seal |
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foreverurz23 New Member
since 2006-02-08
Posts 3USA |
Where have you gone my navy seal? You said you would come and see me I never saw you in your white and blue To say my final goodbye of three years coming Where are you now to show face? I’ve sent letters, but none came to replace Is this a lost love that one always hears Doesn’t it break you to know That when you went, I shed a few tears My redheaded love has gone away For me not to see him but another day Me so young, you so much to live for I’ve opened just one more door How can it not bother you That with you I’ve shared so much For you just to walk away without my touch? Will I ever get to hold you just for one night Then once again, away with the flight I guess mother was completely right Never fall in love with a navy man They only burn out the light |
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jane_kiedis Junior Member
since 2006-02-04
Posts 38Philippines |
such a poetic passion.... Welcome indeed!  ur poem is deeply felt... psychic spies from China tries to steal your mind's elation |
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foreverurz23 New Member
since 2006-02-08
Posts 3USA |
Thank you very much, I think i'm really going to enjoy this forum....the love of poetry, how it brings people together! lol |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Such a sad poem Amanda. |
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