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Evolution - duet with Littlewing
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Evolution - duet with Littlewing |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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Hold me when I cannot repress tears Don’t call it a weakness my heart is not afraid of loving you or being called a fool  place my hands, love upon your own raise them to your face such bittersweet sorrow in transition heed the mercury rising flipping through waves of planes not unlike a banner flapping in victory only to stand sentinel as cards a cross section of Lovers  reshuffle them death faces in rising sun  let my heart then be reborn evolution of love ~~~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ and LittleWing~ Ladies, this is a wonderful poetic collaboration~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Duets...sigh...I remember when I used to do them. This one beautifully handled, with just enough individual color, just enough blend..... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
It is truly lovely. Nice work... both of you. |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Such a beautiful duet, thank you for sharing it with us  Andrew |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Nicely done...different for the two of you M |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Most excellent ladies! Now this I really enjoyed. About time you two blended ink. Well done! Hugs to you both~Nancy In the midst of winter, |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
not unlike a banner flapping in victory only to stand sentinel this was beautiful, you both gave us such a marvelous music, that will carry us through the day...absolutely beautifully done thanks to you both |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Brava, Ladies! Love, Peace, & Joy  Linda |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
What a lovely spread the two of you have laid out before us. (That's tarot terminology for all you filthy minded brethren o mine  )My own cards are gathering dust I'm afraid. No. Really. I'm afraid. (I got the tower and the ten of swords the last FOUR times--and I can't go tossing that on to some poor misfortunate seeker, now can I?) Dare I ask for another reading?  lovely |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
A most excellent presentation done in your dynamic style. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
 Loverly ladies, just loverly. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Lovely collaboration, ladies! *S* |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Wow, you guys are way too kind, besides it was all Susan (it was, don't let her fool you) Karen? I am afraid to even let mine out of the bag . . .  Thank you everyone for responding and liking and especially to SEA for bringing this here. Thank you, my sistah. Thanks guys. |
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ravenapples@yahoo.com Junior Member
since 2006-02-07
Posts 17Los Angeles, CA |
You had me at hello. I thought the poem was over at the fool card but it just got better and better from there. I live the tarot use and the spacing. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Awesome, you two! ...jo |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
"my heart is not afraid of loving you or being called a fool" ...an essential part of love. Great duet! |
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Edward Grim Senior Member
since 2005-12-18
Posts 1154Greenville, South Carolina |
I guess it's true when two great artists come together the result is above any earthly art. This is heavenly ladies. Cheers - Ed Momma says, "Life... is like a box full of chocolates, you never know when you're gonna get one with a nut in it". |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Beautifully done!! |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
beautiful duet-SEA so wonderful to see your words again. I have missed you! Littlewing-lovely words from you as well... This just floated Take care, Amy "When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter" |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Ah geez senility has definately got a foothold on me. (I read this, and for the life of me, remember commenting on it...or so my brain says) anyway.... Lemme say again(?) how much I enjoyed it. Tis a lovely blend of Susaness |
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crimson tear Member
since 2003-06-07
Posts 76Massachusetts |
wow...that was amazing. I really liked the addition of the tarot cards, that was very creative. You two are quite talented individuals and even more so when teamed. |
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