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where my spirit feels free
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where my spirit feels free |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia 
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Balmy breezes blowing, mane flowing in the west you shall find me running freely by the sea, where I must be, to live my life in harmony with the stars and moonlight showers of a Pacific sky, dancing beneath moonbeams and celestial lights, sheltering my soul from earthly frights. I put my feet to flight ‘neath skies where souls seek rest upon billowing clouds, where you shall find me drinking raindrops in wet refreshing peacefulness. As my footfall resounds in the sand seeking the edge of this land, I am as close to freedom as a body can hope to be. Running freely forward, western wind in my mane, with eyes turned constantly toward the open sea, this is where my spirit feels free |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"this is where my spirit feels free" ahhhha yes! mine too!  loved this  |
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marcel Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660az, usa |
I relate to this because of my fear and respect of the sea; I do not swim or know how to, but my love for the peace and uniqueness of solitude.............great piece! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Beautiful piece, Kacy.  ...jo |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OhKacy~ This one is so good that I could almost feel the salt air~ I like everything about this piece~ Your word movement gallops to a crescendo ... depositing the Spirit on the shoreline of freedom, bathed in serenity~  dear lady~*Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
"eyes turned constantly toward the open sea, this is where my spirit feels free" Yes indeed! It's like that for me too. Enjoyed! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
I hear horses Kacy and they sound wonderful. Exceptional work. |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Kacy, you KNOW I love this. Requesting permission to print it off and frame it and hang it on my wall and then He created the horse... |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
This is one of your best! Beautiful. JL |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Good Lord, this is lovely. I have been in the Pacific. One day I will get back there, Kacy. Beautiful, I needed this. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Thank you for these relies! Sky, am happy you liked it enough to print, thanks for sharing your thoughts with me! |
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