Delicately, Diligently, Melancholy.

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Open Poetry #37

Delicately, Diligently, Melancholy.

Marshalzu

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0 posted 2006-02-07 05:54 PM

Delicately, Diligently, Melancholy.

Bleed a little
From cuts scraped into existence
By dull blades, by dull minds
On dull mornings.

Umm thanks for reading

Andrew

JamesMichael
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1 posted 2006-02-07 06:06 PM

Enjoyed...James

Rainbowdust
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2 posted 2006-02-07 08:49 PM

I liked this Andrew... read like you were talking about indifference?

The soul would have no rainbows, had the eyes no tears.

Bagger Vance
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3 posted 2006-02-08 02:26 AM

a 'dull' temperament your muse be no?
enjoyed the read poet

White Gold Wielder

Marshalzu

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4 posted 2006-02-08 04:54 AM

Thank you for reading, I appreciate the replies.

Andrew

helenadepp
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5 posted 2006-02-09 03:34 PM

I thought this was an interesting read

keep it up brother :P

The Lady
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6 posted 2006-02-09 10:52 PM

Enjoyed the poem Andrew.

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