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Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30
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0 posted 2006-02-07 03:55 PM



Down in the valley,
where the sweet stream runs
and seagulls follow the plough,
it was snowing in my soul,
sparkling as it fell
in clumps, catching interupted
sunlight, clouds blocking.
Outside it was the same,
i was absorbing the
day, reflecting it inwardly,
bringing natural healing
to a restless soul.
My mind a tempest
of florid thoughts
flowing fluidly, the
day was a true friend
to hold onto, making me
look kinder to the future.

Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba.

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Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
1 posted 2006-02-07 04:01 PM


Nature heals ~ as does your poetry.

On my second read-through, I envisioned and experienced each and every illustrious line!

Nature's Healings Ways,
Linda



wvatvrider
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since 2006-02-04
Posts 78
West Virginia,USA
2 posted 2006-02-07 04:34 PM


I agree with Linda-nature indeed heals us and more can be experienced with another reading of a poem or book.  nice pictures you have painted
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