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OwlSA
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0 posted 2006-02-07 02:41 PM



TELEPATHY
24 August 2001

Reaching into soft-layered moments,
our minds tiptoe
in spirals
into each other
and leap rainbow
swirls
across the sky.

- Owl

© Copyright 2006 Diana van den Berg - All Rights Reserved
suthern
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1 posted 2006-02-07 02:43 PM


How beautiful this is... yes. *S*
The Lady
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2 posted 2006-02-07 04:40 PM




Agreed. Beautiful and simple.



Rainbowdust
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3 posted 2006-02-07 08:54 PM


Loved this!

The soul would have no rainbows, had the eyes no tears.

HopeS
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4 posted 2006-02-08 01:35 AM


Beautiful mind connections

Hope

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5 posted 2006-02-08 10:50 AM


My sister and I, being very close, have many moments like these.

We call it the "leedle". (We wiggle our fingers atop of our heads like antenna, and say "leedle" in the most alien type voice we can summon.)

You description is much more lovely, Owl.

*leedle*

OwlSA
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6 posted 2006-02-08 12:12 PM



Thank you suthern, Kate, Rainbowdust, Hope and Serenity Blaze.  Each of your responses is much valued and appreciated.  

Serenity Blaze, you may feel that my description is much more beautiful, but I feel that yours is much more fun!

- Owl

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7 posted 2006-02-09 03:06 AM


Interesting..

I wish I were telepathic, or psychic..or perhaps even telekenetic (is that how you spell it?).

Furthermore, I enjoyed the poem.

iliana
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8 posted 2006-02-09 03:48 AM


That's a lovely way to put it!
RedStoneEB
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9 posted 2006-02-09 06:20 AM


I'm telepathic, watch,.......takes a lifetime to gain the information
OwlSA
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10 posted 2006-02-09 11:33 AM


Kaoru, thanks.  I'm not telepathic.  It was just a very good relationship (at times and in its way).  The spelling you asked about is telekinetic.  I'm glad you enjoyed the poem.

Thanks, iliana.  Glad you enjoyed it.

Thanks Redstone.  That is interesting.

- Owl

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