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shades of paul
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In Reality

0 posted 2006-02-06 07:51 PM


Well the poems finally derailed my thought train.
Although it might be time to get back on track.
Would anybody care, or are these poems in vain ?
Sometimes I wonder, should I just paint them all black ?
With blah overload, one hope's the creativity will sustain.
It might be better to put them back on the rack.
I can,t break my chain, so I'm
Coming Round Again.
paul

shades of peace,love,and happiness to you

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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2006-02-06 08:05 PM


Paul~
Well, you can bet your bottom dollar that I like this one !!!

I REALLY like the shape your words took~
That's my thang !!!

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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shades of paul
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2 posted 2006-02-06 08:38 PM


Thank you for the nice comments,Marge
paul

shades of peace,love,and happiness to you

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2006-02-06 09:12 PM


Paul~
I'm back with a 'shaped share' ...
I don't always set out to quill it in a 'shape' ... sometimes the ink just spills it that way~

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Hope you like it~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -   noles1@totcon.com

wvatvrider
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4 posted 2006-02-06 09:35 PM


Nice poem, Paul.  Keep sharing your works with us all. Don't leave them on the rack     and don't paint them
            all black
                    

The Lady
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5 posted 2006-02-07 12:38 PM





Good write Paul.


shades of paul
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6 posted 2006-02-07 08:04 AM



My thanks for all the reply's....paul

shades of peace,love,and happiness to you

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