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CastleGuard
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since 2003-04-30
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Alberta, Canada

0 posted 2006-02-06 07:11 PM



Come, fly into the moonlight, dreamy Love,
To shimmer with pure light on silver beams —
And there among the shining stars to rove
Within the sea of untold secret dreams.
Unbounded and released you freely soar
Where only ones of truest heart will dare —
And if fickle clouds should aim to bar your
View - do not yield to veil of misty flair!
But rise, still rise, and let your beaming heart
Be your only guiding light - though the eyes
May not - the heart will darkness split apart
And lead the way to diamond-studded skies:
This journey lives in daydream of each breath
And follows stars in ring of birth and death.

CG

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1 posted 2006-02-06 08:07 PM


CG~
Write the moon ... you've got my rapt attention~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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EagleScorpion
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since 2000-03-08
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Here, Now, Forever
2 posted 2006-02-06 08:24 PM


very pretty

i enjoyed this


Rainbowdust
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since 2002-12-05
Posts 320
Sydney, Australia
3 posted 2006-02-06 08:27 PM


Beautiful sonnet, CG, you took me there!

The soul would have no rainbows, had the eyes no tears.

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
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Forever In Your Heart
4 posted 2006-02-06 10:57 PM


Beautiful!!!! the moon has always had a magicial, mystical pull for me, it draws me into its misty glow...just like your poem did!

Very uplifting and positive, just what the doctor ordered!

~ARH

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
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Melbourne, Australia
5 posted 2006-02-06 11:03 PM


Absolutely beautiful.  Wonderful imagery.

Take care...........Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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