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Local Rebel
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0 posted 2006-02-06 05:04 PM


primordial ribbons of infinity
pass from the point solitaire
of boundless mass
where once shades of twilight
snuggled within
that tiny elemental bomb
to an explosive kiss
hurled cross time un-ending
through space vast
eternal distance swelling
between shades of twilight
resounding harmonics
brought us once again
into a twilight kiss
brought us once again

until resounding harmonics
between shades of twilight
eternal distance swelling
through space vast
hurled cross time un-ending
to an explosive kiss
that tiny elemental bomb
snuggled within
where once shades of twilight
of boundless mass
pass from the point solitaire

primordial ribbons of infinity

quote:

Notes on Invocation

This is a slightly different approach to the notion of soul mates. The conventional mystical paradigm goes something like this;

A soul, which exists separately from physical bodies, is created and split in two and each half sent to dwell in a man's body and a woman's body until they meet and fall in love, etc. etc. etc.

Invocation looks at this from the conventional paradigm of a physicist. The universe once existed as a single point. All the matter of the universe -- including the matter that comprises you and I, existed within an extremely dense sphere possibly as small as a pinhead.

It is at this point that physics breaks down. Laws make no sense any more. The universe begins to resemble nothing more than a great thought -- or, as I prefer to think of it -- a song.

Within Invocation the lovers exist within this tiny sphere -- 'the elemental bomb' -- snuggled together, they are nothing more than twilight, until they 'kiss' which is the spark, the passion, that ignites the big bang and ultimately ignites the universe spreading out from infinitely small to infinitely vast.

In the process the lovers are obviously separated, until after eons and eons they are finally configured in a form that comprises the essence of themselves as they existed within the primordial stew, at which time they meet, fall in love, and enjoy another twilight kiss.

Entropy wins however, and the lovers cannot remain configured (they die) and dissolve once again into atoms and energy scattered across a cosmos that now is contracting to the big crunch -- the point in time when all matter will reconvene at a single point -- when they will again re-unite, kiss, and the process begins again.



from my site http://www.geocities.com/nighthawke700/soulmates.htm


It should be noted that in the ten years since this was written the field of theoretical physics has determined that the 'Big Crunch' is not likely -- rather -- the universe continues to expand until it tears itself apart.


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iliana
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1 posted 2006-02-06 06:43 PM


Reb, I really like your view on the soulmate idea!  Beautiful writing.   ...jo
Martie
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2 posted 2006-02-06 06:51 PM


LR

Thank you for posting this...it's very interesting and the whole thing would take alot of perseverance and something to be said for patience.  

The Lady
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3 posted 2006-02-07 12:46 PM




Amazing work.

Earth Angel
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4 posted 2006-02-07 09:27 AM



...Saved faster than you can say "soul mates"! I thoroughly enjoyed your poetically expressed philosophies ~ and explanations!

I also want to check out some of those intriguing links you have on your impressive website!!!


EA

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5 posted 2006-02-07 10:49 AM


What an interesting view, Rebel!!
I've saved this so I can read more on your views.
You have a very interesting website, by the way!!
Hugs,
Ethel

beaniebaby
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since 2005-11-17
Posts 55

6 posted 2006-02-07 02:55 PM


its been ten years since you created your site? *hits forehead*
wow where have they gone?
now I really feel old
*picks up her cane and hobbles off to the water fountain*

good work reb...as always

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