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howardtsu
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since 2006-01-29
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0 posted 2006-02-06 04:04 PM


i'd be so surprised

if a girl couldn't disguise

her "Joy" for me

and gave me "Almonds" to see

how much she cares

about ending my nightmares

of being alone

it's Friday the 13th and Freddie Kruger is home

outside there's a "Howling" and some sounds unknown

are coming from upstairs

i pick up the phone

he says he's already there

in two seconds i'm gone

but in the fresh air

a "Scream" chills me to the bone

where's my ice cream cone?

is she alright?

is she filled with fright?

could i be her knight

and rescue her from this "Halloween" night?

Michael and Jason are keeping up with me despite

the fact i'm running at top speed

they're drinking Sprites

while walking, i think i need

my soulmate



love,

howard



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A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
1 posted 2006-02-07 02:41 PM


Cute~ I love scary movies, but not the bloody kind...LOL

I like how you used the words "Almond" and "Joy"...

~ARH

JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
2 posted 2006-02-08 10:35 PM


This is a great write, but I think you need to get out moreā€¦
You know, go see a movie or something.

Enjoyed!

JL


howardtsu
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since 2006-01-29
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3 posted 2006-02-09 11:23 AM


you're probably right


howardtsu

jane_kiedis
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since 2006-02-04
Posts 38
Philippines
4 posted 2006-02-09 11:43 AM


nice stuff to read c",)

i had a great time

psychic spies from China tries to steal your mind's elation

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