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layla
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since 2000-11-19
Posts 74


0 posted 2006-02-05 08:51 PM


What happens when we melt

do we all blend into one unified color?

I wanted to...dissapear in you

wanted to...but you walked away

Dont you know that I would've suffered all the pain

that my body and brain

would allow me to

just to melt into you

What happens when we fade?

Do we all mix into one shade?

When will we end this masqerade

So that I could be free to-melt into you

without feeling any shame

Some times I think the blind are most blessed

They dont see color

so they seek depth

See-you gotta close your eyes to see

Close your eyes so u can find

The strength to melt in me

© Copyright 2006 layla - All Rights Reserved
jody5
Senior Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 876
California, U.S.A.
1 posted 2006-02-05 10:13 PM


Nice poem.  I liked the the symbolism.  It reminds me of how in the bible husband and wife become 1 flesh instead of 2.


        Kim



The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
2 posted 2006-02-05 11:57 PM



"Some times I think the blind are most blessed"

Thoughtful work Layla! I enjoyed it.

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