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0 posted 2006-02-05 03:10 PM



My eternal love,
Come and join me in this dance,
One filled with sweet angels,
And heavenly romance,

Let me paint you,
Without any blemishes of this world,
Each stroke will capture your beauty,
Failing only when the paint depletes,

In the tales of the enchanted,
You eternally remain the beautiful princess,
And in my eyes, you’ll find the spark
Of a thousand Suns burning just for you,

Your compassionate gesture draws me near,
That I can’t help but give in,
Thinking of you and loving you,
Till God himself proclaims it as an obsession,

Even at the end of my life,
Your life gave so much to me,
That I mourn not a thousand deaths,
If I could see you for an instant…

I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

© Copyright 2006 Ronil B Tataria - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2006-02-05 04:51 PM




Beautiful work Ronil.



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2 posted 2006-02-05 06:19 PM


Love is so beautiful, thank you for sharing your loving thoughts


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3 posted 2006-02-05 06:35 PM


Yes very beautiful
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