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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2006-02-04 02:52 PM



You Are Hawk ... I Am Sky
~*Marge Tindal*~


You are Hawk … I am Sky
Soar me feathered, strong
Ascend the currents of my lift
adrift along the path of watch
Protector eye, vision from sky
know thy slated missions well
Flight attend on wayward wind
gliding ever so gracefully along
Seeking, soaring, watchful one
as there is a great need of such
Follow those within your care
that dare to await your watch
Knowing surely as they do
their safe-keep depends
always on you~




~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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1 posted 2006-02-04 02:59 PM


Smiling and nodding a 'well done' at you dear lady!
A most excellent feast for my eyes, mind and spirit.
Love ya lady~
Nancy


In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

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2 posted 2006-02-04 03:00 PM


Marge/sis....May I fly in your sky?  
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Thank you, beautiful ladies and FRIENDS~
Both of you hold a special place in my sky~

I penned this one for ED ... he knows the 'why' of my 'why'~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~


~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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4 posted 2006-02-04 03:19 PM


This is a beautiful poem indeed! Great job!

Ame et Poésie

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5 posted 2006-02-04 03:57 PM


Dear Marge:

This so captured my imagination and I could see hawks soaring while I read it, just as they do around here! You have written an exquisite piece!

Love
Betty Lou

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6 posted 2006-02-04 07:09 PM


Margie girl~
This is indeed one of your most finest, I was captivated by this and felt my butterfly wings soaring along with you - thanks for the fine flight, this beautiful morn sweet Marge.

~hugs~
Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing



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7 posted 2006-02-04 07:23 PM


Marge this is a very inspiring poem and up-lifted me.              

        Hugs Kim


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8 posted 2006-02-04 07:43 PM


yeah i agree with that!
i felt the flow of energy in there, drives me high with every lines c",)


love it!

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9 posted 2006-02-05 12:01 PM




Um hmmm... yes.. this poem soars and took me with it.



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10 posted 2006-02-05 12:37 PM


This flows very well...like the flight of the hawk within a peaceful blue sky.

~sky

I hope someday you get the chance to live like you were dying....
~Tim McGraw

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11 posted 2006-02-05 06:45 AM


Loved this!

- Owl (an owl who is not afraid of hawks)

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12 posted 2006-02-05 10:15 AM


Sometimes he flies because he knows there is that eternal need to watch and watch and watch, on guard....and sometimes he flies because he's hungry.....but always, he flies.

Thank you for the sharing, dear lady....I needed to see this very poem, this very morning.

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13 posted 2006-02-05 10:43 AM


beautiful marriage of skies and freedom

aye

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14 posted 2006-02-05 11:10 AM


The beauty and wisdom of native blood  flowed so beautifully from your spirit quill.

Hugs with love,
EO

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15 posted 2006-02-05 01:58 PM


Folks~
I do appreciate each kind reply~

Ed~
quote:
I needed to see this very poem, this very morning.
Sometimes when we least expect it ... the words circle,
bringing thoughts of one who is dear to many~

Thusly, it is so with this one for you~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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16 posted 2006-02-05 06:13 PM


your truly special marge

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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17 posted 2006-02-05 06:17 PM


As usual, a gem you've penned dear Marge!

love it!

(((hugs))
Charisma

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18 posted 2006-02-05 06:41 PM


I once said to myself i'd be a bird when i die so i could soar through the sky
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I do thank you all ... when feathered words come to rest in the inking nest of this heart ... they are gently caressed then set free to soar to the poetic nest of the intended~

I am blessed with the friendship of Hawk ...~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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20 posted 2006-02-06 04:40 PM


After all my expeditions with camera in hand... you've just proven that photographs aren't necessary when a poet writes words that let you see *S*

Beautiful work!!

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21 posted 2006-02-07 02:23 AM


Suthern took the words out of my mouth. She said it all.

Hugs, Titia

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

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I liked it(alot).............paul

shades of peace,love,and happiness to you

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23 posted 2006-02-07 10:55 AM


SweetSuthern~
You *smile* me ... and as God is my witness ... as I sat the patio just moments ago ... here he came ... knowiing ... the gigantic Red Tail ... three graceful swooping passes ... knowing ... just knowing~

Thank you also Titia ... I am blessed by the friendships of you both~

Paul ... thank you~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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24 posted 2006-02-07 04:13 PM


Marge, I nearly missed this and I would have been heartbroken.

Seeking, soaring, watchful one
as there is a great need of such


May we all be watched over by The Hawk. It rings true to me this day and special prayers go up for someone dear who is in need.

huggles, Marti

"God has put me on this earth
to accomplish a certain number of things.... 
Right now I am so far behind,
I may just live FOREVER!"

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Marge, I don't say the name that was given to me....to describe what I am on the "other side"....but I can tell you it translates to "Spirit of the air"....

Just thought you'd like to know that.

You have a good eye, dear lady, a good eye.

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26 posted 2006-02-07 04:48 PM


I love the outdoors Marge and it  is grand when I can soar outside even when I am in the warmth of my home
                         Danny

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27 posted 2006-02-07 05:13 PM


good read
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28 posted 2006-02-08 10:26 PM


"Knowing surely as they do
their safe-keep depends
always on you~"

Beautiful!!

JL



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29 posted 2006-02-08 11:19 PM


Enjoyed Marge...James
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Forgot to library this... *S*
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31 posted 2006-02-09 07:32 PM


The vision you have etched is beautiful Marge.
Enjoyed!

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32 posted 2006-02-10 12:27 PM


Friends~
I swear, you all are just too, too good to this poet~

To be *gifted* words is my delight ... to know they come freely as Spirits of the Air is such a blessing to me ... what have I better to do ... than share them with some of the nicest folks I know~

It is another wonderful day to be a poet~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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Enjoyed this uplifting write (and will check out your website).

t

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34 posted 2006-02-10 08:09 AM


Marge this is beautiful & especially close to me since I feel the hawk is one of my totems. They are so awesome.
Love ya,
Betty

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35 posted 2006-02-10 08:57 AM


such a precious read Margie, thank you
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"It is another wonderful day to be a poet~"

Indeed it is...for all the reasons you said, and some you didn't.

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37 posted 2006-02-10 05:04 PM


Marge, a wonderful write my friend, lifted my spirits high. Thank you for sharing.

Sincerely
Rick

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38 posted 2006-02-10 08:53 PM


Smooth Marge....real smooth!

INclan

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Because sometimes a birthday 'ray of light' circles to find someone who blesses so many others with his caring~

Happy Birthday, Ed~

May the freckle-monster be kind to you~

Big ole Birth-of-day *HUGLETS* to you~
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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40 posted 2006-04-28 04:30 AM


thanks for bringing this back up
I'm glad i didn't miss it

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41 posted 2006-04-28 03:12 PM


I'm glad you brought this back up. *S* For someone needs to soar... and he'll get more freckles up high, right? *G*

Of course... my freckles are becoming age spots. *grimace* But he's made of sterner stuff... and feathers give protection as well as flight. *S*

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I blessed you for this then, and I bless you doubly for it now.....today I fly, and hawk I am....I must, for the sky should not be bare, whatever winds may come.

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43 posted 2006-05-29 02:35 PM


Hello... Marge!  Thanks for remembering me. Yes, it's been a long time.
As usual reading your poetry inspires me so maybe I'll post something again soon.
Your poem is interesting and lovely.
Take care!

Deb

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I am soooo blessed with the friendship of the Hawk ...

Deb ... thanks for dropping in for a visit and I'll be looking for a new post from you REAL SOON !!!

I love reaching out through the archives and bringing a member back ~'home'~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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