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jane_kiedis
Junior Member

since 2006-02-04

Posts 38
Philippines

0 posted 2006-02-04 01:39 PM

I don't want another heartbreak
For my heart is already in pieces
Crushed with pains of the past
Still hurting and barely beating

As my soul suffers with a battered heart,
I knew I shall find courage not to feel despair
With bitter memories of this so called journey,
Will I ever outlast the battles and cries of my past?

Wounds leaves scars that marks forever
And so the thoughts of life's tragic moments
A feeling that can't easily defy
The limits of one's ultimate emotion

As clouds gathers, rain shall fall
And with dusk, comes the dawn
Happiness begins when sadness ends
With lure of mind it can befall

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2006-02-04 01:45 PM

Jane~

BEAUTIFUL !!!

And I see you got the graphic in this one~

Way to go gal~

You are going to be a real asset to our poetic community~

Enjoy your stay and be sure to read and reply to the poetry of others ... interaction is the key to our developing friendships~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

jane_kiedis
Junior Member

since 2006-02-04

Posts 38
Philippines

2 posted 2006-02-04 01:54 PM

aww... im really flattered with that comment Marge c",)

feels like my heart's leapin thousand times!

B I G T H A N K S!!!

psychic spies from China tries to steal your mind's elation

poetry_queen
Member

since 2006-02-02

Posts 94
england,

3 posted 2006-02-04 05:07 PM

really liked this poem, im still new to the site so i will try to read as much of your work as possible. you have a great talent, so please do keep up the good work

leanne x

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2006-02-04 07:47 PM

nicely done... enjoyed the picture too

Welcome!
M

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

5 posted 2006-02-04 10:07 PM

Very nice, indeed.

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

6 posted 2006-02-05 12:03 PM

Nice work Jane. More please.

jane_kiedis
Junior Member

since 2006-02-04

Posts 38
Philippines

7 posted 2006-02-05 01:31 AM

thanks THE LADY c",)

im very well inspired to make new ones especially now that people like u exists c",)

thanks for the overwhelming support...

*hugs*

psychic spies from China tries to steal your mind's elation

jane_kiedis
Junior Member

since 2006-02-04

Posts 38
Philippines

8 posted 2006-02-10 11:08 PM

psychic spies from China tries to steal your mind's elation

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