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Huan Yi
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0 posted 02-04-2006 08:54 AM       View Profile for Huan Yi   Email Huan Yi   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Huan Yi


They’re probably sour
Anyway said the fox
Of the grapes

And with that it went on
Bright eyed in the delusion
Of still being in charge

Proudly independent
Of anything or anyone

Wholly contained

Indignant
Toward the stars


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poetry_queen
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1 posted 02-04-2006 09:48 AM       View Profile for poetry_queen   Email poetry_queen   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetry_queen

really liked this poem. am new to this site so eventually i will try to read all of your work x
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2 posted 02-04-2006 09:57 AM       View Profile for Ratleader   Email Ratleader   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Ratleader's Home Page   View IP for Ratleader

Wow-that-ending! You do know how to bring a punch up from the floor...dang, I wish I'd thought of this one.....

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RedStoneEB
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3 posted 02-04-2006 01:25 PM       View Profile for RedStoneEB   Email RedStoneEB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RedStoneEB's Home Page   View IP for RedStoneEB

Another strange and chinese poetry type
The Lady
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Yes, but good!


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5 posted 04-23-2007 02:11 PM       View Profile for Drauntz   Email Drauntz   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Drauntz

poem of a poem of a poem.
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