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Solitude

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Huan Yi
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North field lake
On it—one white swan

Slowly gliding
Across the blue

As if to say
What it can not speak


© Copyright 2006 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
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A lesson here...in how to write the short ones. Well done!

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oh, wow!  I agree!  Well done!
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Very nice


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so short but so full of emotion and passion! a great write
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Beautiful nice and simple but beautiful
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Well done John.

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your heart is still wondering.

very beautiful one.
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