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The Maze within
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The Maze within |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia 
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I’m in a maze that’s overgrown I walk and search, but all alone The paths like days seem all the same I’ve not a map or heart to claim Each turn I think I might be right But only walls again I sight I try to climb but only fall The right way out, I can’t recall I’m trapped and maze around me grows I’m numb but no one really knows I yell but who will hear my plea? I’m deep within the core of me I pass the window of my eye Wading through the tears I cry Finding it so hard to see The good things that might come to me I’m lost and don’t know where to go I search for answers I don’t know Met by just another wall And obstacles that block it all In the maze that life did build Every path so question filled Every wall that blocked my view Every turn of what to do? Ever growing, ever lost Pathways that I often crossed In my thoughts which seem a haze Lost within the growing maze Only hope that as I walk A guide within my head will talk Showing me which way is out How to turn the luck about But the maze does grow and grow Nothing but life truths I know Finding I must walk each day Dare the maze and find the way |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
what a breath of fresh air, this was truly inspirational...thank you Rick! |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Lee, lovely to see you here again my friend, time away is too long, always so very nice to catch up. Thank you for your reply, take care and be well. Sincerely Rick |
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XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia |
Wonderful ! Only hope that as I walk A guide within my head will talk Showing me which way is out How to turn the luck about But the maze does grow and grow Nothing but life truths I know Finding I must walk each day Dare the maze and find the way Walk on, dear brother,and know that each crossroad you come to...the one you take will be the one you needed. And that the next message you need will ALWAYS come...exactly where you are. I thank you for the blessing this poem has given me. |
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RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk |
I guess it would be fun to get lost in a maze could be really entertaining if your bored |
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playing.with.crayons Member
since 2006-01-02
Posts 362Neverland |
"But the maze does grow and grow Nothing but life truths I know Finding I must walk each day Dare the maze and find the way" an excellent metre you have there. quite a respectable gift in these parts! always, xx farewell the ash-tray girl |
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jane_kiedis Junior Member
since 2006-02-04
Posts 38Philippines |
i had a nice time reading and i definitely can relate on that... i mean totally!  love every part of it!!!  psychic spies from China tries to steal your mind's elation |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
XOx Uriah xOX thank you for your reply, it was very refreshing and apprecitated, nice to have you visit today. RedStoneEB, thanks for your reply, it would be fun for a while till you wanted to get out, then the frustation would set in, good to have you chat to day. playing.with.crayons Nice to have a fellow Aussie about, thanks for your reply and complement, good to see you here my friend thank you. jane_kiedis Loved every part of your reply, thank you so much for the visit and your time. To you all my friends, thank you for your replies, they were all greatly appreciated and heart felt. Sincerely Rick |
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