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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2006-02-03 08:12 AM


Time Haiku

The hands of my clock
Are butterflies and flowers
What time do you have?


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Susan Caldwell
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1 posted 2006-02-03 08:23 AM


Half past the sumac...

Morning Sy! (your clock is kinder than mine)

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

scorpio
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2 posted 2006-02-03 08:51 AM


I really like this Sy.  Wow!

believe in what your heart feels...

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3 posted 2006-02-03 08:55 AM


If you have the time
I've got the raspberry wine
By the beach is fine




*winkiewinkie*


Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2006-02-03 09:39 AM


Susan,
Thank you dear and your clock may just need a tune up. LOL

scorpio
Thank you for the WOW it's nice to get one every once in a while.

JM
We'll spill a little on the flowers and get the butterflies drunk. LOL

ecrivan
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5 posted 2006-02-03 09:58 AM


a leisurely time to get up, and live by


Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2006-02-03 10:04 AM


ecrivan
Your clock is right on.

LeeJ
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7 posted 2006-02-03 10:40 AM


mine, well thanks for asking dear poet...

mine is like finding a unicorn where none live....hehe

loved this

Earth Angel
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8 posted 2006-02-03 10:42 AM


Sir Haikuteer,
My clock says it is 10 angels: 40 fairies!

My clock would like to spend some time with your clock! Flirty 2

Kiss With Pigtails
EA
Alarm Clock  Alarm Clock

Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 2006-02-03 10:50 AM


LeeJ
Just sprinkle a little rainbow dust in the field. LOL

Earth Angel,
We could have one heck of a time. LOL

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10 posted 2006-02-03 01:15 PM


Each second a rhyme
In this minute of thyme
Tick tocks of sublime

Hope you enjoy your visit with Nan - wish I was there!

Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 2006-02-03 01:31 PM


Sharon,
I wish you were here too. Thank you dear.

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12 posted 2006-02-03 03:31 PM


tick said flower spot
tack mentioned butterflies
tock let's show spring time

enjoyed your haiku much

((hugs))
Charisma

Seymour Tabin
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13 posted 2006-02-03 04:07 PM


Charisma
My pleasure for your read and responce.

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14 posted 2006-02-03 04:12 PM


Seymour~

All night ?

All RIGHT !!

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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iliana
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15 posted 2006-02-03 04:58 PM


Now I'm lost in time....hehehe.  Liked this, Sy.   ...jo
The Lady
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16 posted 2006-02-03 05:05 PM



I love your clock! I live on butterfly time. Thanks for sharing this treasure.  

Seymour Tabin
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17 posted 2006-02-03 05:07 PM


Marge,
Like your answer.

Thank you iliana, enjoyed your reply.  

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18 posted 2006-02-03 09:35 PM


Most unique for you, Sir T.  But,  we all
are allowed to deviated off the old worn
path, huh?

Seymour Tabin
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19 posted 2006-02-03 10:47 PM


Lady
You are a love,

Barry,
A little deviation is good for you. Thank you

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20 posted 2006-02-04 04:34 AM


a clock of beauty and warmth
nice one sir

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Seymour Tabin
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21 posted 2006-02-04 08:27 AM


MGROVES
Are your arms butterflies and flowers? LOL

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