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CastleGuard
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0 posted 2006-02-03 03:44 AM



if you were a painting -
I sure would be at a loss...

when I first saw you,
you were a Monet -

and when we first kissed -
a van Gogh

then after time
a Picasso came to mind

and now —
since I know you well —
you are Mona Lisa...

CG

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iliana
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1 posted 2006-02-03 04:02 AM


Liked this!
tracie66
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2 posted 2006-02-03 04:19 AM


Oh this is gorgeous - enjoyed very much

~hugs~
Tracie

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It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing



RedStoneEB
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3 posted 2006-02-03 05:20 AM


An everlasting smile-
so divine

A Romantic Heart
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4 posted 2006-02-03 07:18 AM


Very beautiful, creative, you sir have painted a masterpiece of a poem!

~ARH

Susan Caldwell
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5 posted 2006-02-03 08:29 AM


Enjoyed this...

Monet is my favorite and I have, as yet, to acquire a canvas reprint...but I will..

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

wanderingin
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6 posted 2006-02-03 09:20 AM


I really liked this!
Marge Tindal
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7 posted 2006-02-03 09:43 AM


CG~
*smiling* at the tender of this render~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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8 posted 2006-02-03 11:22 AM


Mona Lisa has a mind bottleing smile, that people have been trying to figure out for years...as if she/he knows something very mysterious?  

This was a joy to read...thank you

Dominique-Simone
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9 posted 2006-02-03 11:24 AM


Very Endearing....
CastleGuard
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10 posted 2006-02-04 04:51 PM



Thank you everyone for the words of appreciation.

CG

poetry_queen
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england,
11 posted 2006-02-04 05:31 PM


like this poem a lot. am still new to the site so i will try to read as much of your work as i can keep up the good work
leanne x

The Lady
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12 posted 2006-02-05 12:12 PM




Enchanting work CastleGuard.



playing.with.crayons
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13 posted 2006-02-05 12:26 PM


lovely work. A beautiful write. xx

farewell the ash-tray girl

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