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oakgrove
Junior Member

since 2006-02-01

Posts 12

0 posted 2006-02-02 09:38 PM

i took a little green daydream
out of the jutting hair of innocence
and brought it down to my white garden of sand
covering it with a blanket of hospitality
i let it hear the eighteen birds of reason
bending and worn
i wanted a vivid thing of context
embossed with the color of a friend
and rushing against the insincere
paused outside the mouth of exposed time
i try to grab the worthy twist of fate
hiding interposed in the weeds of calm
touched by hand of a palm
stroked by the breath of a shell
i spoke asthma endearments
and babbled glistening promises
meant for a longer end
a slight breeze of change blew
a conch across a field of familiars
to my excited arm
to grab and blow with all my honesty
and call the others to supper

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

1 posted 2006-02-02 09:51 PM

good read...welcome to Passions

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

2 posted 2006-02-02 09:56 PM

I liked this.

-Juju

-<>-~-<>-~-<>-
* Juju *
-<>-~-<>-~-<>-

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2006-02-02 10:15 PM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
Beautifully expressed entrance post!
I look forward to reading more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

Please check your email for a special Passions greeting~

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

4 posted 2006-02-02 10:41 PM

Another excellent poem.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

5 posted 2006-02-02 10:43 PM

Welcome to Passions.
Thought provoking first post.
Enjoyed the visual.
TD

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

6 posted 2006-02-03 07:27 AM

friend oak g...daymmmmn you sound like
no...but I do like the sound of you
enjoyed this

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

7 posted 2006-02-03 07:57 AM

Welcome to Pip!

I do look forward to hearing more from you.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

8 posted 2006-02-03 11:28 PM

interesting write...welcome to Passions

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

9 posted 2006-02-03 11:45 PM

Welcome to PIP! Quite a write!

poetry_queen
Member

since 2006-02-02

Posts 94
england,

10 posted 2006-02-04 05:20 PM

really enjoyed reading this poem, very powerful write

leanne x

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