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Open Poetry #37

Water scene.........Tanka

Charisma

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since 2000-09-30

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lost in blue pages

0 posted 2006-02-02 08:16 PM

wrinkled water scene
causes by some rain droplets
how surface splashes
underlying flow disturbs
fisherman boat rocks gently

Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12

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Waukegan

1 posted 2006-02-02 08:45 PM

wrinkled water scene
caused by rain droplets

surface splashes
underlying flow disturbs

fisherman boat rocks gently

..........................

Good

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

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Realms of Light

2 posted 2006-02-02 09:14 PM

What a tranquil scene you painted! Your descriptive words transported me into it!

It was exceptionally appealing to my senses!

It is so good to be reading your poetry again. Charismatic One!

Warm hug,
Linda

Martie

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3 posted 2006-02-02 09:30 PM

Charisma....what a lovely and peaceful feeling there is to this!

The Lady
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4 posted 2006-02-02 10:55 PM

Exquisite Charisma.

RedStoneEB
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uk

5 posted 2006-02-03 06:24 AM

Another poet that reminds me of chinese poetry

Susan Caldwell
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Florida

6 posted 2006-02-03 08:32 AM

Well done!! loved that first line!

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

tracie66
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since 2000-01-18

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Australia

7 posted 2006-02-26 11:38 PM

very tranquil

~hugs~

Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
— W. E. Channing

Mistletoe Angel

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8 posted 2006-02-27 09:28 PM

(does happy fairy lake ballet skip) This is sooooooooo beautiful, dearest friend, I've missed you soooooooooo much and am sooooooo happy you're sharing some new poetry with us all, yay, this is soooooo beautifully tranquil and breathtaking, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Theresia, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other"

Mother Teresa

INclan
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since 1999-07-20

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Indiana, USA

9 posted 2006-02-27 09:57 PM

Thank you, Chairsma

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