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Huan Yi
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0 posted 02-02-2006 05:42 PM       View Profile for Huan Yi   Email Huan Yi   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Huan Yi


On some dates
It gets dark
Early

Dinner
Across the table

An empty chair


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1 posted 02-02-2006 05:46 PM       View Profile for Charisma   Email Charisma   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Charisma's Home Page   View IP for Charisma

This I like very much.

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wow..  

I loved this alot John.

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Elegant and lovely.


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You never seem to amaze me
RedStoneEB
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Is that because you left before the meal arrived or he left you terrible how it gets dark too early
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Solstice.....hope for the solstice, then it all turns.

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I love your work...especially the relationship of your titles to your work and this one is exquisite...bravo!!!
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my. i talked about the same empty chair. How wonderful is your piece..while mine is better.
ha.


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