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Open Poetry #37
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Courage2Survive
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since 2005-11-15
Posts 32
0 posted 2006-02-01 01:31 AM

A kajira cloaked in the finest red silks,
captive of ones one mind.

This girl's Master,
her mind.
Punished solely by her mistakes.
Beaten with a flogger, bruised on the heart.

Hung from shackles,
bound and branded on the thigh of shame.
Broken, towering at the feet of her mind.
Head tilted downward, in fear.


A kajira cloaked in the finest red silks,
captive of ones one mind.

Just say the word and this girl could be free,
although it wouldn't be indeed.
For captivity was her only mistake.
© Copyright 2006 Kellie Marie Cantrell - All Rights Reserved
Danie Franklin
Member
since 2005-12-05
Posts 68
1 posted 2006-02-01 01:46 AM

This is a very strong write it hits those old solar plexes right where it hurts. Thats a very good job.

Danie
Bagger Vance
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since 2006-02-01
Posts 108
Aotearoa
2 posted 2006-02-02 12:36 PM

OUCH!!!

the pain is felt
oh aye indeed

White Gold Wielder
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