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ambermize
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0 posted 2006-01-31 08:48 PM



Saturated, with regret,
Tears lay weak and fragile,
Delving deep, within my mind,
Its more than I can handle.

Sufficing, only nothing,
Lowly passions in defiance,
Screaming voices, silent now,
As I become reliant.

Softest virtues, in your touch,
But mirrored by imperfection,
Somehow lost inside this lust,
With no sense of direction.

Devoured here, beyond belief,
I fall, still empty handed,
Bracing pain, within a hell,
That taunts, and leaves me stranded.

Willingness, to break this way,
Disgust, forever lurking,
Deep beyond my memories,
The fragrant sense of hurting.

Pausing here, to fall apart,
Bleeding past your touch,
Knowing my angst, was never worth,
Feeling for you this much.

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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2006-02-01 09:58 AM


Amber~
It's nice to see you here~

This heart-flow from your pen touches me~

Seems one goes through a lot to get to the closing of your piece -

'Knowing my angst, was never worth,
Feeling for you this much.'


AMEN !!

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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ambermize
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2 posted 2006-02-02 04:56 AM


Marge.... I missed you all soooo much. Its been a long time. So much has happened in my life since I have last written anything. I think I just shut that part off for awhile.
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