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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Dying By: Noah Eaton 1/31/06 . . . I'm dying, dying, to feel your heart, beating with mine... . . I'm dying, dying, to feel our, young fingers intertwined... . . . Wishing into life and beyond iridescent dreams, to hear, the music of the spheres, dying to see you strip down your silhouette, and hold you here... . . . I'm dying, dying, to kiss the dew, from your eyelids... . . . I'm dying, dying, to share and disclose, all my most mystical secrets... . . . Yearning to speak love, in a whole new accent, together laughing, it never comes out crystal clear... . . dying to hear you breathe in my ear, and hold you here... . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . I'm dying, dying to catch a little glimpse, I'm dying, dying to taste the taste of lips... . . . Learning to interpret, the Braille of your goosebumps, kissing and making up, for all these lonely years... . . dying to blanket you with my vows, and hold you here... . . . reassure me, I keep hearing you breathing for a reason, in kissing and making up, for all these lonely years... . . dying to blanket you with my vows, and hold you hear... . . . dying to kiss your skin, and hold you here... . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . "If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other" Mother Teresa |
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Rainbowdust Member
since 2002-12-05
Posts 320Sydney, Australia |
"Learning to interpret, the Braille of your goosebumps" That's a beautiful sentiment Noah.. maybe it just struck home at this point im time as my arms are covered in goosebumps! Thanks for warming me up. The soul would have no rainbows, had the eyes no tears. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hey my sidekick!! Excellent write..very much enjoyed. I could feel the longing in your heart. Hugs~Nancy In the midst of winter, |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...prepare yourself...you never know when they will feel the same way...James |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Excellent! - Owl |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Noah I hope you find someone to share your love long before you die!!  |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Noah Angel! Your grasp of the perfect union is just amazing....she is there, somewhere, and patience is part of the payoff in the end. This is just oh too good!!! I just luvs ya..... ...jo |
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Danie Franklin Member
since 2005-12-05
Posts 68 |
Noah, Thats a absolutly teriffic write, you catch the feelings and emotions so fully and truthfully. Just know its when your not looking she will appear and your heart will leap and your breath will quicken and you will just know. Shes the right one. Danie |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
An exquisitely written poem of yearning and burning! She better arrive pretty soon! I wouldn't want one of my dearest angel friends dying on me! lol Hugs with lots of loving friendship hugs, Linda |
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