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Bodger
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Tolerance for a short time

0 posted 2006-01-31 02:25 PM


As a wind gently slowing twisting you drew across my hand softly ruffling hairs on the back of my hand as you passed in a breath of wind touching a breath as you never turned leaving vapours entire in a fragment of philosphy woven



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Rainbowdust
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since 2002-12-05
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1 posted 2006-02-01 05:14 PM


Wow, this is absolutely beautiful, I loved it!!

The soul would have no rainbows, had the eyes no tears.

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
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The Southwest
2 posted 2006-02-01 10:06 PM




Delightful!

Bodger
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since 2005-06-12
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Tolerance for a short time
3 posted 2006-02-03 06:04 PM


Rainbowdust

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Wow, this is absolutely beautiful, I loved it!!
The soul would have no rainbows, had the eyes no tears.

I need to work on the works and thoughts but your words are appreciated

Dave

The Lady

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Delightful!

To be worked on - as I seem to do for years

Dave

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