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howardtsu
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since 2006-01-29
Posts 678


0 posted 2006-01-31 12:15 PM



i rocked you all nite

you felt it despite

the fact that you're married

for years i've carried

this crush on you, but you parried

me away

and i guess you did obey

your heart

and if you did, the fact that we're apart

shows me that we have to start

using AT&T

so we can flee

into a fantasy

where your'e constantly handing me

your friendship or your love

either way i'll be your dove

you can always rely on

if i continue to try on

will you finally see my plan

and let me be your man

i'm sort of like Peter Pan

in a jar

with your slices of bread

we could talk in your car

and use the jelly between us to go as far

as we want to

like "13 Ghosts" i haunt you

but like a diamond i'd flaunt you

to every guy in town

while your wearing an elegant evening gown

like "Pretty Woman" we've found

a mutual understanding



love,

howard

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Bagger Vance
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since 2006-02-01
Posts 108
Aotearoa
1 posted 2006-02-01 12:28 PM


dayummmmm

um... not bad poet



i 'jiggied' with the emotional flow
of this

White Gold Wielder

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