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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

0 posted 2006-01-31 11:35 AM

Gray clouds float high above in misty skies
while the wind sings melodies on the breeze
melancholy, the color of her eyes
gazing at wondrous visions through the trees.

Soft billows of white dancing through the air
gradually fade into shades of blue
bringing forth a rainbow beyond compare
gleaming illustrious, prismatic hues.

Glistening subtle tones on dew kissed leaves
awakening with yawn, golden rays shine
warm glowing in beauteous amber weave
lighting the way, that seeking eyes might find;

Treasures of life lie, up around the bend
waiting to be claimed at the rainbows end.

seek the flame within yourself
and let your soul be cleansed by
the fire of love. Axel Ekenstierna

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

1 posted 2006-01-31 12:05 PM

You found such beautiful, descriptive words in your ink. Lovely. Joyce

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2006-01-31 01:21 PM

SweetGentleOne~
JUST LOVELY, hon~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

3 posted 2006-01-31 02:47 PM

It's truly a lovely poem.

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

4 posted 2006-01-31 03:09 PM

wooohoooo Donna, you rhyme beautifully m'gentle one.

it's a

m xx

how i would love you, love you as no one ever did! Die and still, love you more. And still love you more..and more
~Neruda~

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2006-01-31 03:55 PM

Lovely this..
Lovely you.
Hugs~Nancy

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

6 posted 2006-01-31 05:13 PM

Soft, lovely and just plain beautiful poetry.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

7 posted 2006-01-31 06:11 PM

Well done Donna...very lovely sonnet

M

Bagger Vance
Member

since 2006-02-01

Posts 108
Aotearoa

8 posted 2006-02-02 12:19 PM

wot a vista

sighs

you take me there

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

9 posted 2006-02-02 01:31 PM

This is really lovely, Donna!

....jo

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

10 posted 2006-02-02 03:17 PM

A beauty of a sonnet, Donna!!

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

11 posted 2006-02-02 06:14 PM

Very Lovely!

((hugs))
Charisma

CastleGuard
Senior Member

since 2003-04-30

Posts 760
Alberta, Canada

12 posted 2006-02-02 06:20 PM

A sonnet!!!!

Too few of those and too far in between, methinks...heh.

Thank you, nicely done.

CG

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

13 posted 2006-02-02 08:44 PM

Well done Donna. Lovely picture, lovely thoughts.
TD

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

14 posted 2006-02-03 03:52 AM

*sigh*
such beauty in your words, tender feel...loved this

~hugs~

Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
— W. E. Channing

Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

15 posted 2006-02-03 06:19 AM

Such interesting choice of vocabulary here Donna...the colour ran off the page and onto my keyboard...enjoyed this so much.. thank you..

Goldenrose.

Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba.

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