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Open Poetry #37

Listen to Me For A Moment

tatalinia
Member

since 2005-12-17

Posts 137
CA, US

0 posted 2006-01-31 11:24 AM

please stop and listen
don't go please hear me out
when I tell you what its all about
you won't say no
walk with me for a moment
hear my side of the story
no need for misunderstanding
or critical judgement
trust me when I say
I have what will work for you
I have not been here this long
for nothing from stupidiness
no, this journey to your landslide
its all going wrong thats
where I come in, so be quiet
for just one minute and
let me present to you LIFE

I do not need shine or wealth, just a pen and some paper for my health

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

1 posted 2006-01-31 01:52 PM

good luck

Bagger Vance
Member

since 2006-02-01

Posts 108
Aotearoa

2 posted 2006-02-01 12:20 PM

a pause sometimes is all that is really required
instead of the rush of too many words and thangs

made me think

White Gold Wielder

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

3 posted 2006-02-01 10:18 PM

Excellent poem.

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