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Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

0 posted 2006-01-31 04:08 AM

If only you knew
how you hold my heart
in your hands
how with one movement
you could crush me
how you hurt me
so deeply
without knowing it
without intending to

I have to look elsewhere
for what I can't have from you
most times I'm happy
some times though
like now
I know that I love you
though I can't have you

so I cry

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2006-01-31 07:13 AM

Rhonda..I love this because I can feel it deeply and can understand where you are coming from...it is sort of my life

I am glad you are writing and I am able to read you again

M

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2006-01-31 07:28 AM

In the past, I have cried such tears myself. You expressed those feelings so well. May your tears turn to smiles of joy, as have mine.

Sending a warm, loving ~ and understanding, hug,
Linda

Marshalzu

Member Elite

since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

3 posted 2006-01-31 09:38 AM

Great writing Rhonda.

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

4 posted 2006-01-31 09:39 AM

sometimes the things that drive us are so hard to reach ....

and we never realize to "break"

nice to read you
ct

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

5 posted 2006-01-31 03:13 PM

Men!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2006-01-31 03:27 PM

You have expressed this feeling..so well
one most of us have felt before..
Well said.
Hugs~Nancy

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

7 posted 2006-01-31 03:30 PM

aw...even in its poignant sadness, this is a fine love write, Rhonda

Bagger Vance
Member

since 2006-02-01

Posts 108
Aotearoa

8 posted 2006-02-02 12:11 PM

Rhonda

such ache of heart and heavy skies
much i felt this

aye

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

9 posted 2006-02-02 01:50 PM

Have to go along with Mysteria....Men!

RedStoneEB
Senior Member

since 2003-06-08

Posts 772
uk

10 posted 2006-02-02 05:21 PM

We all have someone we want but can't have

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