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Dominique-Simone
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0 posted 2006-01-30 10:35 PM



This legacy
Patiently accepting
waits in the crook of my room
not sure how to overcome the injustice of it all

we cry together in the arms of others
hoping that they understand
even just a little

acknowledging the moments
of birthdays and weddings
but it hasn’t been enough
will it ever

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The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
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1 posted 2006-01-30 11:22 PM



"we cry together in the arms of others"


Very well done Page. Legacy could mean many things. I see a baby in the crook of this room.


Dominique-Simone
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2 posted 2006-01-31 06:47 AM


Thanks Lady
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