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The Lady
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0 posted 2006-01-30 05:54 PM



I wake every morning with
the blues on my breath
strange days
not like before

I believe to my soul Sweet Serenity
is moanin’ the blues to me
in my dreams
making me a gift
I can’t put down

they ride me like a witch
hum me under their breath
walk me where I would not go
haunt my every covenant

yet at night
I lay up in the bed
and wait
for their
sweet return

[This message has been edited by The Lady (01-30-2006 11:44 PM).]

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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2006-01-30 06:17 PM


nice write!
Enchantress
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2 posted 2006-01-30 06:23 PM


Excellent!!  Enjoyed!
Hugs~Nancy

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

Dominique-Simone
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3 posted 2006-01-30 09:42 PM


I love this!!! Great Job!
The Lady
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4 posted 2006-01-30 11:16 PM



Thank you ladies.

WindWalker
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5 posted 2006-03-24 07:41 PM


I like this one too. Excellent!!!!!!!!!!
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6 posted 2006-03-24 09:59 PM


Y'playing my song Lady? *battin' lashes*

smiling wide

and oh

if you are taking requests?

serenity needs prayers this weekend--there's a very special favor I request of the powers that be.

Love this, and I love your work. Even if it ain't for me, I'm gonna let my ego grab it.


OwlSA
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7 posted 2006-03-26 12:08 PM


Love this, Kate, as I do all of your poems.  They are all so different, but all have your signature on them, a signature of excellence!

- Owl

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8 posted 2006-03-26 12:58 PM


I agree - all of your work is first class, and you sure have a style of your own.  I am glad Karen grabbed this already as I was about to take it for her.

When you get time here is why  
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The Lady
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9 posted 2006-03-28 06:51 PM




Thank you WindWalker!

Yes serenity… the song is for you… inspired by you.
You’ve got my prayers… sorry I’m late.

Thank you for your lovely words Diana. You too inspire me.

Mysteria thank you for your encouragement and the link.


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