Gave The Feeling Of Affinity

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Open Poetry #37

Gave The Feeling Of Affinity

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

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Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2006-01-30 01:20 PM

Gave The Feeling Of Affinity

An affinity with the ocean
I felt the soft salty spray
Strolling along the beach
I reached a secluded bay

Into the warm rock pools
I reach in with my hand
While gentle waves flow
Rivulets form in the sand

Knelt by the water's edge
The surf comes rolling in
Lapping through my toes
Waves caressed my skin

Whilst embracing the flow
I hear the whispering sea
Placing a shell to my ear
Gave the feeling of affinity

Hope ©2006
Link to the poem with music and graphic below
http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/95/poem_812456.html

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

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Gaia

1 posted 2006-01-30 08:31 PM

nice and warm, I could almost feel the sand between my toes

Kristabell
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since 2003-11-29

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Portland, OR

2 posted 2006-01-30 08:42 PM

Great sensory! Nice write.

MGROVES

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since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

3 posted 2006-01-30 08:45 PM

beautiful

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Bodger
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since 2005-06-12

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Tolerance for a short time

4 posted 2006-01-31 02:37 PM

Hope

Good to just read these words

Dave

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26

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The Southwest

5 posted 2006-01-31 02:40 PM

Very pretty...

Bagger Vance
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since 2006-02-01

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Aotearoa

6 posted 2006-02-02 11:58 AM

yes poetess friend
your write is skin feel and elicits many a sigh
to be where the wavelets and air soothe the say
of soul....

honored to read you

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