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Goldenrose
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0 posted 2006-01-30 04:14 AM



Slip away to a solitary place,
nobody there to destract you,
save for your inner voice without a face,
to a wild place with perfect view.

Revealed in my solo walk,
from inside, love and kindness,
caring deeds, whispering talk,
walking in a wilderness.

In my soul, clouds float by,
somedays dark, then white,
always with sun in a vast blue sky,
elongated rays beaming brite.

Outside my amber soul,
colour, beauty, kindness i see,
all make up my being, my whole,
solitude thoughts set me free.

Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba.

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Katerie
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since 2006-01-27
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1 posted 2006-01-30 05:40 AM


You take an intersting direction with this one- like your others, very nice.

Like a ship blown from it's mooringby a wind off the sea- I have been changed for good.

tracie66
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2 posted 2006-01-30 06:06 AM


applauding the imagery this poem produced..thanks for sharing.

~hugs~
Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing



A Romantic Heart
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3 posted 2006-01-30 07:31 AM


I am blessed to know the deeper meanings of all your poems, inside information always helps

~ARH

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4 posted 2006-01-30 09:39 PM


i have missed your thoughts. nice

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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