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The Lady
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0 posted 2006-01-30 12:59 PM




We walk wet sand
footprints of
the future trail us

we turn quickly
to find
only silk gray fog

© Copyright 2006 Kate - All Rights Reserved
Dark Angel
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1 posted 2006-01-30 06:17 AM


hmmmm sounds like Huan Yi

excellent

how i would love you, love you as no one ever did! Die and still, love you more. And still love you more..and more
~Neruda~

Georgiegirl
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2 posted 2006-01-30 06:34 AM


A lot said!
The Lady
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3 posted 2006-01-30 05:45 PM


Thank you both very much.

You  think it sounds like Huan Yi, Dark Angel? I hope it sounds like him. I admire his writing so much. You're right.

Martie
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4 posted 2006-01-30 06:41 PM


I would have guessed John also.  Well done!
Midnitesun
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Gaia
5 posted 2006-01-30 08:32 PM


yes, 'tis our John
nicely done!

Dominique-Simone
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6 posted 2006-01-30 09:41 PM


Great Job...It is Definitely John yet it still shows a bit of you in it
The Lady
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7 posted 2006-01-30 11:20 PM




Thank you Martie, Midnitesun and Dominique. I'm pleased it sounds like John.



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