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Day of peace
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Day of peace |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams 
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Sunday, a day of peace But still I look out side Waiting for the snow to fall And it falls today I know I will see you again And what I don't know Is what I will do... The snow is so graceful Lacing the landscape Some how I want to touch it But I am afraid I am going to see you again And what I don't know Is what I will do... What will I do? What will I do? What will I do? -<>-~-<>-~-<>- |
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RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk |
You'll see whoever you want to see again we see them many times |
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DennisTheMenace Member
since 2005-09-04
Posts 240 |
Wish it were me you’d see, I know what we could do, hold hands and crunch the snow, and build a fire and drink hot chocolate. |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
Juju, This is good, lyrical without being immature. There's a certain eternal feminine quality, like Tzu Yeh's poetry. John |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Rather whimsical and thoughtful at the same time. You'll see him again, I bet. |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
red stone thank you. Dennnis the mennis (; John, Thank you Illiana thank you -<>-~-<>-~-<>- |
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