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Breaking Through
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Breaking Through |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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I pretend, even with you that everything is ok. That I am a survivor with heart, one that can continue to love and enjoy what comes before me. But truth breaks through every now and then, with held back tears and a scratchy voice and time's passing a heavy weight to carry and bear. Giving up seeming the best option when I wear the words that stain me, when even bleaching can't take away those hurts, without leaving a sting. You read into me what you wish, and what I allow between the lines is left up to your imagination. It is my escape into a world where thoughts are allowed and my senses have closure even if my passion... has yet to be seen. M |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"You read into me what you wish, and what I allow between the lines is left up to your imagination. It is my escape into a world where thoughts are allowed and my senses have closure even if my passion... has yet to be seen." Excellent thought-provoking write Maureen. I so much enjoy your words. Hugs~Nancy In the midst of winter, |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thanks for being such a faithful reader Nancy... some days are not as good as others~~this being one  M |
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DennisTheMenace Member
since 2005-09-04
Posts 240 |
Every day can be a challenge, even more when you kid yourself, like me signing up for calculus. Now teach me how to survive that pretty lady and I be most happy. Between the lines and on the lines you write good. Enjoyed |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
that wasn't so menacing  ..and brought a smile to my face thank youM |
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DennisTheMenace Member
since 2005-09-04
Posts 240 |
The Menace part is Sunshine picking on poor little me (Gloom too, and he’s suppose to be my friend), but then agin I do get in trouble a fair bit. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read  |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Your poetry has always reminded me of reading someone's personal diary. It is always intimate and revealing a lovely heart. *hugs*...jo |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
A personal poem of the underlying hurt within us all, if only people would look and see the cause and effect in life, enjoyed the way you handled the subject, sad for the subject matter M...thank you.. Goldenrose. Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba. |
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luminosity Senior Member
since 2005-11-18
Posts 813 |
You read into me what you wish, and what I allow between the lines is left up to your imagination. It is my escape into a world where thoughts are allowed and my senses have closure even if my passion... has yet to be seen. oh lady, you do write the very heart of me as well......the resignation of this hurts, but the hope ...the hope is still there |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
Very complex but excellent Dave |
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Bagger Vance Member
since 2006-02-01
Posts 108Aotearoa |
Maureen there's the 'hurt' and then there's the 'break through' aye poetess i feel the flow of your thoughts |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Beautiful expressed feelings penned straight from the heart. Words I too, can relate on. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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