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RedStoneEB
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0 posted 2006-01-29 02:58 PM


Run2U (part 3)

Care to take me to the place I was born,
It’s just a train ride away-
I don’t want to go on my own
all the faces I used to know have changed,
And we could walk hand in hand-
let me tell you my childhood places
now smaller than once first seen.

I never knew life held so many disappointments,
Your voice was the only sound drowning out-
the depression that kept sinking in-between
that thought of a better place to be,
But I stayed for you because I felt hope-
knowing your smile that held me
would soon be those of arms around me.

Was it just the movement of the sea,
That led my voice into a scream-
and you stood and listened to my pleads
and then made your own to that sea,
Each raindrop holds emotion I’ve felt it-
each kiss holds a message I’ve passed on mine
and each fairytale ends just like ours.

And now I know it’s too late to look back,
Thinking what part I could change if only-
but I know each change ruins what we had
we’ve made our own little story,
So I hold onto the last words you gave me-
I’ll always Run2U
isn’t that what keeps me smiling still.

© Copyright 2006 Lee Hepworth - All Rights Reserved
Bodger
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1 posted 2006-01-29 04:31 PM


Thoughts do run

And they echo

Words worth writing

Dave

Juju
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2 posted 2006-01-29 04:34 PM


I liked this very much (:

-Juju

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Earth Angel
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3 posted 2006-01-29 09:10 PM


A captivating love story!


EA

The Lady
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4 posted 2006-01-30 01:15 AM




"each kiss holds a message I’ve passed on mine
and each fairytale ends just like ours."

Once again... nice work Lee. Very pretty and sensitive.


Goldenrose
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5 posted 2006-01-30 05:07 AM


There is a light, shining from within these words, a quality that is not seen enough on these pages, brilliance can be a lustre, or the calibre of the mind, enjoyed this..thank you..

Goldenrose.

Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba.

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6 posted 2006-01-30 09:21 PM


this made my heart smile

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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