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0 posted 2006-01-29 02:02 PM


When the sun came to rise,
My eyes open to your lovely sight,
I couldn’t breathe if you left me now,
Thought about this but a million times,

You are like my life that I never had,
Couldn’t lead it if you weren’t there,
Had my mind made up when I saw you,
Dressed in nothing but pretty red,

Too many days I cried without finding love,
Never knew it came at the right time,
Flown down from heavenly worlds,
Into my heart like a shooting star,

So many of us give up on love too soon,
I was also the one, who sang the same tune,
But you have done so much for me,
Without you, I can’t began to live,

Many others could have been with you today,
But I am glad you chose to stay with me,
Till the end of your days and mine,
I will take care of you even till my dying breath,

You get the love and respect you deserve,
In turn I ask for you not to hide your love,
Share it with me today and now,
And make me feel like a flying white dove.


I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

© Copyright 2006 Ronil B Tataria - All Rights Reserved
Bodger
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Tolerance for a short time
1 posted 2006-01-29 04:39 PM


Two rules or may be more , yes, more

Love the person or dont

Make them laugh

and maybe they decide


you are worth being with

Good luck to you

Dave

intention
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since 2005-11-13
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2 posted 2006-01-29 04:49 PM


awesome

Love me for who i m

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
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3 posted 2006-01-29 05:42 PM




Sounds like true love. Nice job.

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