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OwlSA
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since 2005-11-07
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0 posted 2006-01-29 10:05 AM



NEARLY
17 August 1986

My cross is truth,
and my need, perfection,
And so, before you,
I could not
truly mourn
the loss of any,
But now,
because we almost blended,
I grieve
the loss
of us.

- Owl

© Copyright 2006 Diana van den Berg - All Rights Reserved
Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida
1 posted 2006-01-29 10:07 AM


I want you to know how much I love reading you...

and I am clearing off a shelf in the library for you....

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

2 posted 2006-01-29 10:10 AM


sigh.....feeling this one deeply Dianna...

absolutely love this.  
to the library with it....

seek the flame within yourself
and let your soul be cleansed by
the fire of love.  Axel Ekenstierna

RedStoneEB
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since 2003-06-08
Posts 772
uk
3 posted 2006-01-29 03:20 PM


Its amazing how you write its perfection
miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060
OH
4 posted 2006-01-29 03:44 PM


a mesmorizing write!

miscellanea

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
5 posted 2006-01-29 07:01 PM


Thank you Susan, I am most honoured.

Thank you Gentle Spirit.  I am both glad and sorry that you felt this so deeply.

Thank you so very much, RedStone and miscellanea.  I am glad you enjoyed this.

- Owl

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
6 posted 2006-01-30 12:42 PM



I agree Diana.. perfection.



OwlSA
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since 2005-11-07
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Durban, South Africa
7 posted 2006-01-30 11:00 AM


Thank you Kate, that is high praise.

- Owl

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