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Huan Yi
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0 posted 01-28-2006 08:39 PM       View Profile for Huan Yi   Email Huan Yi   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Huan Yi


Breathing in
Breathing out

Quietly silently because
She is moving
Inside the heart


© Copyright 2006 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
The Lady
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1 posted 01-28-2006 10:55 PM       View Profile for The Lady   Email The Lady   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for The Lady


Your poetry greatly appeals to me John. So much in so few words.
DejaEntendu
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2 posted 01-31-2006 06:50 AM       View Profile for DejaEntendu   Email DejaEntendu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for DejaEntendu

this is truly great. I don't even know where to start. It's a precise feeling that is so hard to explain, yet you put it into words so greatly. well done
thank you
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines


3 posted 01-31-2006 06:54 AM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nakdthoughts

a lovely write, John...
makes this rainy morning seem brighter

M
Huan Yi
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4 posted 01-31-2006 09:05 AM       View Profile for Huan Yi   Email Huan Yi   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Huan Yi


Thank you all
Sometimes I seem to do well
with the young
and the young at heart

John
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5 posted 04-23-2007 01:55 PM       View Profile for Drauntz   Email Drauntz   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Drauntz

how beautifully singing the love, if she is love.


supper!!!
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