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Open Poetry #37

I Could Just Cry

icebox
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since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

0 posted 2006-01-28 08:23 AM

sunlight burns my brain

cheerfully as morning birds

oblivion’s lost

©2006 by icebox

Katerie
Member

since 2006-01-27

Posts 92
Central New York

1 posted 2006-01-28 08:27 AM

Haiku- good stuff. You're talented.

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2006-01-28 08:32 AM

hmmmmm..thinking on the oblivion

M

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2006-01-28 09:36 AM

Excellent..love it!
Hugs~Nancy

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

Martie

Moderator

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

4 posted 2006-01-28 11:52 AM

icebox

"cheerfully as morning birds"

RedStoneEB
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since 2003-06-08

Posts 772
uk

5 posted 2006-01-28 11:56 AM

I never really could write this kinda poetry i never really thought about attempting it

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

6 posted 2006-01-28 03:29 PM

Liked the contrast! *hugs*...jo

jody5
Senior Member

since 2005-12-21

Posts 876
California, U.S.A.

7 posted 2006-01-28 04:28 PM

I love the morning birds too. I watch them in the back yard. very nice haiku.

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

8 posted 2006-01-29 09:22 AM

What makes me think you are not a morning person? Hee hee. I am lucky because I enjoy waking up. Enjoyed your poem.

- Owl

Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

9 posted 2006-01-29 10:00 AM

Somedays all I need are your words.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

10 posted 2006-01-30 09:52 PM

your words, as the birds, are always a pleasure to wake up too

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

11 posted 2006-01-31 09:13 AM

My brain felt like this all of yesterday.

Then my son told me to look up and see Mommy?

The birds think it is Spring.

*smile*

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